Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in order to to express my concern about my roommate's illegal activities and annoying behavior.
Firstly, over the last month there has been frequent visitors for my roommate during out of visiting hours. This is very distracting and I am unable to concentrate on my studies daily. As you are aware of the fact that the exams are approaching and I would expect to maintain peaceful environment without any distractions.
Secondly, I have noticed that my personal belonging are being used by my roommate without seeking my permission. I have also complained him about faulty electronic gadgets which he used couple of times last week. So far there is no improvement in his behavior.
I would request you to transfer him to another room as I am not finding it easy to cope up with his bad behavior. Otherwise, I request you to allocate me a separate room for my which would help me to concentrate on my studies for the upcoming exams.
I am looking forward for your swift response and actions.
Best Regards,
Ragav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...well. I am writing this letter in order to to express my concern about my roommates i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79365079365 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73198331222 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9300342736 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169482570691 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589782484971 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535833935287 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909758718191 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519595560718 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.