You recently returned by plane from an overseas trip. When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline.
In your letter:
• say when and where you lost your hand luggage
• describe the bag and its contents
• suggest the action you would like the airline to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with deep regret that I forgot to take out my hand luggage from plane's cabin when I was disembarking at the Sydney International Airport. The flight number of the airline which was used for travelling was EK616 and was a direct flight on 26 December, 2019 from Jinnah Airport, Karachi and arrived after 24 hours to Sydney Airport.
You can easily recognise the bag, as it was brown in colour and had white polka dots all over it. It was a custom made bag and my name 'Umair' was embossed with capital letters on the front of the bag. One of the bag's distinctive look is that it has a plastic moulded zipper which was broken and green stick-on was used. There was nothing fancy or delicate in my bag, all it contains was my grey coloured track suit, reading glasses and a packet of chips.
I would be very grateful if you can return my bag while I am on a vacation in Sydney till 5 January 2020, so that I can use my bag for other purpose as well. I can be reached through email which is umair.hassan234@gmail.com.
Will be waiting for your response.
Yours’ faithfully,
Umair Hassan
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| 2020-03-25 | Kunal Bajaj | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2019'.
Suggestion: December 2019
...was EK616 and was a direct flight on 26 December, 2019 from Jinnah Airport, Karachi and arrive...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...can easily recognise the bag, as it was brown in colour and had white polka dots all over it. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48803827751 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76305743515 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9225849709 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165105686003 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674308676689 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505590371679 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093615172882 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142736881486 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.