Today, in many countries, we can see a large number of people who are migrating from rural areas to big cities. This pattern has many disadvantages for both cities and rural population. In this essay I’m going to discuss about the reasons for why this happened and the effects of it.
Firstly, we should know migration from rural to the big cities has many reasons. When we want to talk about the cause of this trend we have to notice about the shortage of facilities and welfare! While governments couldn’t prepare the average of facilities in rural such as good schools, enough hospitals, roads, and … people have to leave their hometown for having better quality of life. So we can say the most important cause of this trend is Lack of facilities.
Also we can talk about work opportunities. One of the important challenges in rural is shortage of work opportunities to compare with big cities. People couldn’t find suitable job in rural so they have to search in cities. There are many people who they live in rural and work in cities many of them migrating to cities after a while.
Furthermore, we can talk about safety and security in cities to compare rural. Safety is another bold part for migrating from rural to cities.
In conclusion, migrating to cities has many reason. If governments create standards of facilities in rural and keep there safe, people stay there and don’t migration to cities. As you Khow this trend has many disadvantages for cities like pollution and full of crowded has many disorders for cities.
- Having police officers patrolling the streets is often considered an essential way toreduce crime. How effective do you think police street patrols are? What other ways of reducingcrime can you propose? 11
- Having police officers patrolling the streets is often considered an essential way toreduce crime. How effective do you think police street patrols are? What other ways of reducingcrime can you propose? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Today, in many countries, we can see a large number of people who are migrating from rural are...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e of this trend is Lack of facilities. Also we can talk about work opportunities. O...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... In conclusion, migrating to cities has many reason. If governments create standards of fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67686068572 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466165413534 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8877119377 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0372233105072 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.015294998237 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0150134021135 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0247761878585 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00633107236579 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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