Having police officers patrolling the streets is often considered an essential way to
reduce crime. How effective do you think police street patrols are? What other ways of reducing
crime can you propose?
The rate of criminal activities is soaring in communities these days throughout the world, so authorities should take effective actions regarding deterrence of this issue. It is always claimed that police patrolling play a vital role in dropping crimes, although there are other supportive measures that should be taken.
Effectiveness of police street patrol could not be overlooked with respect to crimes such as burglary and theft in the societies. For instance, during new-year holidays that people are in vacation, they take burden of making city far from burglary and other sorts of crimes. Furthermore, societies could be faced with dramatic decrease by presence of police among people and as a result, it would deter youngster from being accustomed to committing crime in the future by intense supervision.
On the other hand, there are other ways which contribute to reduction in crime in societies. Police patrolling could come along with sophisticated justice department and adept detective away from street, hopefully this could readily guarantee finding out about the source of crimes and the assessment of identity of wrongdoers. Plus, people themselves should be wary of their surrounding and as long as they faced with crimes they should call police station in order to deal with problems as soon as possible. Of course, reduction in crime could be probable by having help of authorities, media and schools. Schools from earlier age could raise awareness of children about the hazardous outcomes of committing delinquencies. Similarly, media could inform people in a large scale about the downsides of crimes no matter where they are located.
To conclude, it is manifested that the role of police street patrol is inevitably exemplary in crime decline. However, provision of other facilities in police and justice department could support this issue appropriately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, similarly, so, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41016949153 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82646417657 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4167911237 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20903163843 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867830972828 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722350760788 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142152383326 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413711452193 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.