some people become famous in their early age. what are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays it is easy to become well-known person. If they are young it is easier. So, we know that easy ways have difficult survive. And I would talk about its advantages and disadvantages being famous at early ages.
Starting with advantages of being famous, we can mention about one of them, which is economical side. Plenty of famous people can earn more money than some businessman. Being famous at early ages is good for creating own business early. In this way, famous person can increase incomes of family badged.
One of the other advantages is about charity. Because of earning much money this famous person can help poor people. For instance, who has not much money for paying education payment, some kind of operation and etc. If they do not do this kind of charity we cannot judge them. Because this is their own money and business. But helping to others is make them lovely person.
In the other hand it has more disadvantages. For example, if you are famous this means a lot of people know you. So if you want to go shopping, restaurant, touristic places, meeting with friends or some activities paparazzi’s cameras will catch you. And it makes you fell bored, tired and confused. Because you cannot act like you want or free as other people. Associated to this, sometime famous people stop their working and trying to be forgotten. Also they decide to retiring.
Sometime earning more money at early ages causes suicide. Early age people have not more life experiences. In this case they could make false steps about their life. Ordinarily they use their money in the bad ways for illegal things. They become narcotic and alcohol users. At the end they lose their health and popularity. As a bad result they lose their youth and life.
One of the disadvantages is that they think that they can live without their family and the break all relationships between parents and siblings. They allow new ones to their life, but sometimes they choose false person which are money friendships.
In conclusion, plethora of people think that famous people have comfort and painless life. And at the end of my essay I want add this: If you are famous at early ages, it is hard to survive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84031413613 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44586826984 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507853403141 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9318366743 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.78125 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9375 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295212344557 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743718141388 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656937531237 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147256236327 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565393270741 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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