It is often argued that technology has made human more social, and there are vast majority of people who thinks that technology has high chances to kill human relationship. In this essay, I will speak about the pros and cons of technology with the live examples exist in the market.
Surprisingly , Technology became one of the powerful weapon to connect people across globe since 1995, When Yahoo has started its first emailing system. All the Global industry for an example IT Software industry, Health care industry has started communicating to each other via one click of a button. According to a Research , People are getting married online which is tremendous in today's era. There are no human interactions are required, starting from posting a letter to parceling a diamond to closet one, Which is markable. We should not ignore the fact that email or text communications can not replace a human expression. Technology has also removed that barrier, and now video calls are into place.
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On the other hand , People who thinks technology has made us less social, which is also partially correct. For an example, Children are more busy playing video games, PUBG instead going to a football or a cricket ground. Unfortunately, they are missing the super commentatory of their coolest grandparents, meeting friends and most importantly missing blessings from neighbourhood. In conclusion, there are less human interaction which can not be replaced by any technology no matter if it's a facebook messanger or WhatsApp group chat etc.
In my opinion, We should always set a benchmark, which area is best for technology and which are not. Because, We can not ship a diamond from india to Europe via a postman. Similarly, We can not have a candle light dinner with our soulmate using google duo. So it's our responsibility to choose things wisely, either to be social using twitter or hosting a friend's birthday party. Last but not least , Human is the best creation of God, So it's in our hand either to be more social or not.
- You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letterDescribe the itemExplain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take 78
- You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem.. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take 73
- It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all bokf 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ls are into place. On the other hand , People who thinks technology has made u...
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...replaced by any technology no matter if its a facebook messanger or WhatsApp group ...
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... best for technology and which are not. Because, We can not ship a diamond from india t...
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... with our soulmate using google duo. So its our responsibility to choose things wis...
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...iends birthday party. Last but not least , Human is the best creation of God, So i...
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..., Human is the best creation of God, So its in our hand either to be more social or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, similarly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94721407625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7614077607 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9297909706 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2352941176 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158238248357 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496765860998 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775596989278 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106317450664 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624274001322 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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