Surprisingly, We have seen a huge barrier between generations in terms of civilisation and customs. There are lots many reason behind this big change in the society. In this essay, I am going to discuss about the cause and impact of the behavioural changes in all the generations exist in the community. And what are the efforts is considered to change this discrepancy.
In my opinion, Age is the first and most reason to this differences. However, I believe technology has also played some important role to create uncertain barrier. To illustrate, people of sixties are more social compare to teenage and younger. However, today's generation is more practical and self centred. There are always conflicts lie between senior and younger in term of goals, thoughts, executions etc. This biggest change has started since 1995 when Yahoo has launched its first emailing system across globe. World started communicating each other ideas via one click of a button. Past days, There were no such trend to go for shopping or to have dinner in a restaurant. They certainly used to meet every morning while on walk and used to share their thought process, which they still love to do that. Because , it's really difficult to change a human's root, which they learn in their childhood. Similarly, Teenage are more likely to hangout with their friends instead of grandparents. They are more often to go to a club instead of going to a historical temple. Because they see the fascinating world in the internet as a daily routine and less follow the elders at the home. However, Parents or Grandparents used to visit museum with their family or used to picnic at the countryside to enjoy the nature.
In order to change the differences, there should be a fifty percent contribution by all the ages. Elder should organise some cultural events once a month where teenage can also learn some basic of our originate. At the same time, Teenage should also focus to engage their parents of their daily activities, for an example they should invite their parents to their group and should describe them about the technology and demonstrate them by playing a power point presentation about the coolest world they are living in.
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- Some people believe that technology has made a man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, similarly, so, still, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92761394102 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64055269146 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576407506702 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0528065818 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5238095238 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150896658828 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507618189464 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693023330587 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12698231217 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911135582889 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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