Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
God has divined with so many beautiful things on this flora and fauna and one of them is animal which is the important spices on the earth. zoos are the place where some environmentalist conserve the animals who are about to finish. Although some people are not in favour of it. this essay elaborates both the views along with the example and conclusion.
These days, animals are under threatened from the human. To be more specific, human beings are destroying the rain forest to full fill their requirements, which is the house of the animal. Following this, zoos can protect these animals who are under threat. The reason is that they are in a safe environment managed by the trained staff who can ensure the animal look after. there are examples of successes in this respect, such as with Pandas, which have been endangered for many years but have been protected.
However, there are more convincing argument to close down the zoos. there are many animals who are not falling under the same category and keeping the animals in the zoo only for entertaining and educating the people. keeping animals inside the zoo, can destroy their natural habitat. If the government and environmentalist wants to preserve such animals, they need to keep them in some century where they can live their life freely and no one can harm them.
In conclusion, animals should be protected but not in the zoos, it should be closed down and preserve them into the parks or century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8418972332 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48847426732 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2981798405 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15981453265 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060844213171 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462607196169 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105285102568 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181791446124 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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