You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
ear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to one of your camera which I purchased last week but never received in spite of next day delivery option from your side. I am looking forward to receiving it as quickly as possible else want you to take some action from your company.
There are many more companies in the market who sell professional cameras with discounted prize but because of your reputation, I selected your enterprise. When I ordered camera online thru official website of yours, it was showing that if I order it right now then I will get it by tomorrow otherwise I have to wait till next Tuesday, so I ordered it promptly. The main reason why I am in so much hurry is, I am a travel blogger and I am roaming around the globe and clicking pictures of different architecture however I had my old camera but it broke down suddenly and i already have planned my next trip on upcoming Saturday. So I have to get my camera before Friday noon.
I would like to suggest you that, if you could personally look into this matter and either send me my product as soon as possible or refund my money. I am looking forward to hearing positive news from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Jessica Max.
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- Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say– Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.– Suggest a future use for this building.– Recommend a way to raise money for repairs. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ear
ear Sir/Madam, I am writing this le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, in regard to, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62443438914 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51678910339 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651583710407 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5531544571 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175377452411 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667238483707 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377321666252 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116026450737 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111906724326 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.