In this modern society, scenario has been changed as people now prefer to live on rent rather than owning it. I feel this trend of living has both pros and cons. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of renting to individuals.
To begin with, there are plethora of pros of renting a house but the fundamental one is now most of the youngsters working in a organisation in which they are supposed to transfer from one place to another in short time. Therefore, it is not convenient from them to spent huge amount of money on owing new house everytime. Furthermore, in this competitive era making their own career and securing future in terms of job and money has become their priority. Also, due to easy availability of houses and apartment on rent with properly interior decorated and facilities like lift, car parking etc. They hardly bothered to own it.
Moreover, I think it has cons too. Major concern is whatever they paid as rent is considered as an expense as compare to investing money on buying a house will be their asset. When people live on rent they do not live with freedom while using furniture or equipment’s of landlord as they always worried about its damage. Besides this, there is no any security of staying for a long period of time. Landlord may give a short notice of vacant the house whenever they want to. These factors really effects the budget of a person.
In conclusion, I believe benefits of this overweigh its drawbacks. Its mainly depend on the people’s affordability, choice and need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...bout its damage. Besides this, there is no any security of staying for a long peri...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s no any security of staying for a long period of time. Landlord may give a short notice of v...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a long period of time. Landlord may give a short notice of vacant the house whene...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...nefits of this overweigh its drawbacks. Its mainly depend on the people's affo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68475270402 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.86488866 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166702136322 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462865225447 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555349113245 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959261425876 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481846709754 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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