Studying abroad can be highly motivational for student and also inspire their dreams. However,whilst studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on student,there are also many difficulties that they may meet along the way. With this in mind,it is more advantageous to study at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some student have different views whether studying in other countries more beneficial rather than in home town. While some individuals believe that it has it is own drawbacks,I would argue that getting knowledge abroad have more advantages and opportunities.
On the one hand,student who prefer to stay in their hometown,they would still close to parents. For instance,if you go abroad,you should leave your old life,parents and friends,but staying here you will have support of them. Secondly,not everyone can adapt to different people and nationalities with their own culture and beliefs. However,pupils who will enter the university in hometown where they already have adapted will feel themself on own ground.
On the other hand,these who go study abroad will have more experience. Firstly,they can learn new culture and history,meet new friends. Foe example,the methods of teaching,educational system are differ and international group will give you more opportunities to grasp new knowledge well and get more inspiration for future studying.
Secondly,it is the best choice to be independent,to show your parents that you are ready for singly living,that you are enough responsible.Therefore,students can not afraid of going abroad because there is more advantages.
The conclusion is simple here,studying abroad can lead to some problems,but if you surely decide to be independent you should go and there is nothing difficult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6866359447 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67235135806 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9041575982 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207882519544 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829029897464 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324917398096 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117605412955 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00699679332031 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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