Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past?
it is generally agreed that in the day and age, the phenomenon of bad relationship between teacher and student is increasing common. For example, in the class ,it is different opinion that make teacher and student to quarrel each other even to fight. it means that environment of work and study is effected, thus teacher fired and student expelled is going to happen. In my opinion, now it is different from the past, nowadays, many student not respect teacher.
There are possibly several reasons contributing to the phenomenon. Firstly, modern society has enough educational resource. In the past, many people can not gain education because shortage of educational resource, only bigwig can has chance to learn and they will vary treasure this opportunity which is obtain more knowledge, so they are quite respect teacher. However, nowadays, all people can get education whatever who you are, this result in the phenomenon happen.
Secondly, people’s value which is only learning can lead to success like ancient person side has changed. learning was not only way to get success, nowadays people can do anything they want, as long as they reaches certain high level in this aspect, they not only can get more money but also can receive respect form many people. Therefore, many student treat teacher more free.
Finally, in the past, teacher can optionally strike student to redress they wrong behavior by because teacher is the authority of education. nowadays, teacher can not uses stick to punish student, if teacher dose that, they will suffer parental reprimand, inquiry of education bureau and school and public opinion, this will cause teacher punished or dismissed by school. Accordingly, present student’s wrong behavior will not been change.
general speaking, student should respect teacher. Recognizing the fact that as society develops many old viewpoint changed should drive us to conclude that student has not respect teacher as previously thought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37579617834 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60776497247 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7376530663 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255479776473 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887275707856 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593894736965 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143451174208 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348282606569 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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