while we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties , a normal worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, 60 or 75. in different countries clearly there is a little concession to proper retirement age . until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment. give reasons
The retirement age has long been a contentious issue all across the world. We generally witness that some leaders in politics take the benefits of power even in their eighties whereas it is necessary for a common person to take retirement between the age of 50 and 70 and the relaxation for proper retirement age is very low in some nations. This essay will discuss the reasons why people ought to encourage staying employed until they are healthy and want to.
To begin with, the more time people will stay employed the more it will benefit the country’s economy. For example, a recent study has shown that nations where people work even after their middle or retirement age are more financially sound than those do where they take early retirement. As a result, there is no reason to deny that late retirement is beneficial for society.
Furthermore, the more time people will spend in their job the chances of diseases will be less. When people spend more free time they feel isolated which in turn results in various psychological effects and hence give rise to health issues. A survey, for instance, has proved that people who got retirement at an early age have suffered from depression because of isolation.
To close, retirement has affected not only the individual’s life but also the society . In my opinion, people should be inspired to stay in paid work as long as it is possible for them even at any age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ividual's life but also the society . In my opinion, people should be inspire...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82591093117 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62816319992 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4999803227 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220239639045 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829927680304 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766238995653 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139834035464 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779783200349 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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