many people think regions affects successful persons. what is your opinion about native regions and accomplished persons influence on them.
Success depends on various things in life. Some people believe that native region plays a very significant role in life to achieve success in future while others maintain that birth place has no role to play in achieving success in life. This essay will discuss the reasons why birth place has both positive and negative role to be a successful person.
To begin with, sometimes birth place has avery crucial role in achieving success. Firstly, people in the upperclass neighbourhood got more employment opportunities in comparison to those in far remote areas. For example, a person born in a metro city has more options of white collar jobs than to those in rural areas. Furthermore, people in the developing countries are more healthier and wealthier which makes it more easier for natives to achive success in future.
On the other hand, native region is not important in most of the countries these days. many countries are meritocracies. people are selected on the basis of their quality, experience and education. Large number of people, for instance, in high profile jobs in western countries belong to developing counties. Changed patteren of hiring process has removed the importance of native region in achieving success.
To conclude, this essay discussed the ways birth place plays both type of advantageous and negative role to be accomplished person. INn my opinion, despite some benefits,to be a successful person people have nothing to get from the region they belong to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
... people in the developing countries are more healthier and wealthier which makes it more easie...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... healthier and wealthier which makes it more easier for natives to achive success in future...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...re easier for natives to achive success in future. On the other hand, native region is...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...nt in most of the countries these days. many countries are meritocracies. people are...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...days. many countries are meritocracies. people are selected on the basis of their qual...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...n. INn my opinion, despite some benefits,to be a successful person people have noth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1646090535 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71315471138 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56378600823 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8404983167 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6428571429 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235117551811 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799514068719 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537988458085 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143961303516 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346766940061 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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