It is believed that if huge conglomerates, plants and working staff moved to the suburb, traffic jam and apartment issues would be solved. I completely agree with this point of view and I think that it will help to reduce traffic and accommodation issues.
First of all, relocation of corporations and their employees will decrease traffic jams in the cities. In other words, thousands of people will not go to work and back home in the rush hours. In the Moscow, for example, it is required at least three or four hours to get from the point A to the point B. In comparison with another example of Apple, which build its factories in the countryside. Their workforce does not suffer from waiting in the jam for hours and comfortable get to the workplace in 20 minute. Moreover, their psychological condition is quite better than employees who perform their work in the metropolises.
Secondly, finding appropriate housing in the big cities is extremely complicated. In other words, if companies relocate to the suburb, people can find apartment within city with suitable price range. For instance, in Beijing has shortage of housing for 40 thousands, because of overpopulation. In order to solve this it will be enough to relocate 20 plants to reduce accommodation scarcity twice. That is another reason why I strongly support the idea of displacing factories to the rural area.
To conclude, moving huge manufacturing companies, their working staff to the suburb will relief pressure on traffic and housing in the metropolises. People will not stand in the traffic jam for ages and could afford to find accommodation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06296296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91799440678 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.192306066 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225723214656 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070678603116 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406453055131 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13610342639 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146306481885 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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