Dear Mr Williams,
I am very shocked to learn from your letter that the noise from my flat has been a source of disturbance for you and and it has been spoiling your evening and causing distress.
As you may have guessed, i am trying to refit my kitchen in the evening when i get back from my office. Unfortunately, it is taking longer than expected and i have been having problem with getting things to fit properly. The banging and hammering must have created all the jangle and i should have been more cautious.
I am utterly regretful for that. I had no idea that the noise would reach your flat and cause you trouble. Please accept my sincere apology and i assure you that i will be more careful from now on.
As the kitchen work is not finished, i have decided to call a professional after reading your letter. I will instruct him to keep the noise level as minimum as possible and the work should be done in the next two or three days.
I am really sorry to have caused the problem.
Yours sincerely,
Dean King
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...as been a source of disturbance for you and and it has been spoiling your evening and c...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g distress. As you may have guessed, i am trying to refit my kitchen in the ev...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to refit my kitchen in the evening when i get back from my office. Unfortunately,...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng must have created all the jangle and i should have been more cautious. I am...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...e. Please accept my sincere apology and i assure you that i will be more careful ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4554973822 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34240393009 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0262232118 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3636363636 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331659436721 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118416907601 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927425573704 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170756046265 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107013590708 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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