You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Madame /Sir,
Am writing to you to give comment and feedback of cookery course, that I had last 3 months at your school cooking for the period of 4 weeks from 01 to 31 March, which was beneficial for me as it’s encouraged to enter to cooking world.
Before I join the course I hesitated about the course, but just after the first day I totally change mind I enjoyed being in the class, because of many reason, I began with chef which was professional and helpful, and has special technique in how to teach cooking with knowledge of deferent chopping in all test Italian, French, Spanish, and also how he lead the teams and create funny and knowledge atmospheric.
Since I finish the course, I started to cook and try new chop in every Sunday for my wife, which allowed me to have ability to cook different chop.
I would like to proposed to organize cake courses in order to learn method and ways of papering different type of cake and baking, which will be used in all family event during special occasion like birth day, family gathering.
Best regards:
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: Am I
Dear Madame /Sir, Am writing to you to give comment and feed...
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Line 17, column 148, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... enjoyed being in the class, because of many reason, I began with chef which was profession...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86979166667 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37376041299 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 16.3608247423 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.568081236 44.8134815571 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.75 76.5299724578 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 16.8248392259 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20873039128 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909286499756 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095980643677 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117089107158 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100128574471 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 8.37731958763 304% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 7.45979381443 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 8.54432989691 248% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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