The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The plan illustrates the layouts of Public Park, namely Grange Park when it was opened in 1920 and the layout of current days.
Several changes have been made in the layout of the park compare to what it had in 1920; while a few structures may be completely restructured or demolished, some items were remained as it is or added.
The main entrances, one at the top and one at the bottom on the map and Rose garden near the entrance are remain unchanged, while several structure are demolished or restructured such as fountain and pond for water plants etc.
The earlier seating arrangement's locations are rearranged to the center of the park around the Rose garden, which was earlier situated near the right of the entrance. The stage for musician was totally renovated and given a new look; a new name is given to this redesigned structure, namely amphitheater for concerts. Similarly, top right garden is replaced by cafe and pond is redesigned for children's playground.
Few structure such as bottom rose garden and Glasshouse were completely demolished. While new area for water feature is erected the bottom right corner of the map, a new car parking area is introduced in the map, which happen to be underground car parking area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...p and Rose garden near the entrance are remain unchanged, while several structure are ...
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Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun structure seems to be countable; consider using: 'several structures'.
Suggestion: several structures
...he entrance are remain unchanged, while several structure are demolished or restructured such as ...
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Line 11, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ituated near the right of the entrance. The stage for musician was totally renovate...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun structure seems to be countable; consider using: 'Few structures'.
Suggestion: Few structures
...designed for childrens playground. Few structure such as bottom rose garden and Glasshou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, similarly, so, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91509433962 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71424046127 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4554558152 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169827686685 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080588082894 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122497038185 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119816387214 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137471841084 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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