There are multiply reason why educated people have to get more salary is the are rewarded the time that scarified for advancing their thinking to contribute for the better of the community. If they are giving values and pay them off a considerable salary it will encourage young people for getting their goals to education.Consequently if there is no reward for that sacrifice to get more into education it will directly affect there will be lesser number to have educated people in the centery.there is a lot of innovations ideas which saves peoples life from being extinct. The scientist which spent most of the time with out having spare of time for their personal needs should be consider to get a higher salary. Of course discovery of medicine for curing congested disease like Malaria,
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Faraj.khalikov
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91044776119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89482989103 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.648173353 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.5 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147516490865 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781662340463 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05250718107 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147516490865 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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