Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think that it is good, while others think it has some disadvantages.
Discuss both views.
Today’s world, sponsoring sports clubs and players has become an effective way of advertisement of companies and their products. There are those who believe that this method has a significant impact on companies and society, others think it is not. This essay will examine both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, as an advertisement method of funding sports contains several benefits for companies, players, sports clubs, and also society. Firstly, in point of view of benefits for companies, this method offers them to introduce their products in the market. Nowadays, many people admire some athletes who are successful in their sport field and tend to imitate those players’ behaviours, lifestyle, and even their style of dress. These people’s preferences may be affected by these athletes, for example, if a person has admirable feelings to an athlete, they could purchase products which are provided by companies to athletes by sponsoring them. As a result, this could provide companies to increase in income. Secondly, this method could also benefit for the society. For illustration, sport clubs can use this money given by companies to improve their sports facilities which may give a significant chance to train the future’s young athletes.
On the other hand, there could be also disadvantages, especially for companies. Companies can be negatively affected by the behaviours of sponsored players. If an athlete commits a crime, such as drug using, there will be a lot of news circulating in the media, which makes people have disgusting feelings toward that player. Thus, this may lead to damage the company’s reputation among the public and business environment. Furthermore, the company might have had to signed of the advertisement contract, so the money spent on this contract will be wasted.
In conclusion, there are several reasons, whether sponsor sports as an advertisement method is beneficial for companies or if it contains more disadvantages than benefits, as discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ages than benefits, as discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45597484277 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0224314005 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550314465409 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4457861843 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198956759541 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641438029914 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432283751299 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130136405452 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037493464591 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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