An increasing number of people now prefer to go shopping in supermarkets rather than small shops and local markets. Is this a positive or negative development?

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An increasing number of people now prefer to go shopping in supermarkets rather than small shops and local markets. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowdays globalization is increasing day by day and because of that more global brands and companies have been reached to far east from west and to north from south through impressive mall culture. But while at one side this commerciallity is on boom and on the other side local and small shops are bleeding due to less and no business since these changes.

while everyone's life has become hectic nowadays and people only have time on weekends to spend quality time with family and friends. And here malls come with fun day out concept where you can shop, can watch movies in multiplex, can eat in food court and most importantly children like to play in play area.

As per small-scale shop association (SSSA), the business of local and small shops have been affected badly and almost 50-70% drop in their earnings. The main reason behind is that these shops have limited stock with low variety of different products range. where as in shopping complex people have many choices available under one roof.

Although organized market like malls and shopping complex are the future of the society however it give negative impact on local market shops.

So to sum up, instead of competition with big shopping malls , our loved local shops should keep those daily essential stuff and stock which we need then and there, and people won't go malls for every small purchase.

these relevant stock will make these shops unique and profitable in the business everyday

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90725806452 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29326060642 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649193548387 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9661768571 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.7 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238872076422 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938031142706 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566633253172 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117128394511 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530847045859 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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