Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
it has been noticed that nowadays everyone wants to explore the world different corners and wants to be the first to go to the different places either its extremely cold like antarctica or hot like Sahara dessert.
In my opinion its always good to visit unseen part of the earth but certainly choose the place according two big and important factors. Firstly think about your own health and body reaction as when we go places like Sahara dessert and antarctica there could be low oxygen level or dehydration which can affect your health badly and it could be life threatening situation for one in individual.
Secondly, as we all know that global warming has been increased immensely and main reason behind it the ignorance of human being. when we travel to different part of glob, we definitely increase the tourism of that particular country which could be a huge contribution in economy of that nation.
but at the same time disadvantages of these travel are that we make these places more dirty. according to Antarctica Survey of universe (ASU) every year 2000 tons of plastics waste is increasing in that area which coz of melting of huge icebergs.
However I would say visiting different places like Sahara dessert and antarctica will give a unique experience in that atmosphere and as a great writer said that once should see the entire world before he/she dies
So to end up, I recapitulate that you visit wherever you want to in this free world but take care of your own health and mother nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8122605364 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5095990172 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7983978264 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15341317743 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634217884106 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482169556182 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747126697993 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431404413712 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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