The figure above illustrates the percentage of household possessing and renting accomodation in both England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
In general, the proportion of people possessing and renting their current home had changed dramatically over the given period.
In 1918, while the proportion of households in rented accommodation was at the highest point of around 78% which is just tripled comparing to those genuinely owning their home (approximately 22%). However, the trend had altered significantly as the number of households in rented accommodation kept decreasing and the other kept rising to the point that they equally contributed 50% to the proportion in 1971.
As we can see from the figure, the percentage of households possessing their home gradually increases to its peak at just below 70% in 2001 before decreasing by 5% by the end of given period. The opposite tendency can be seen in the case of those in rented their home as the statistic also turn around by increasing 5 percent after bottoming out at just above 30% in 2001
- Many people believe that reducing speed limits is the best option for road safety improvement.Do you think there are other measures that could be put in place?What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 89
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree. 61
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. 73
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1091954023 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92124237647 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.4160958851 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178959081671 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101100136879 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918452572791 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126577285789 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102411405098 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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