Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to help their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that Young people are the most critical and effective Blocks in a society. It sparkes a controversy among critics that young people give their valuable time to help the communities which they belong to or not. some are in the opinion that they have a strong feeling of responsibility making them more motivated to help their people, but others believe that they are very busy and humanity is nowadays less important than things attracting their attention in different ways like social networks and the Internet. I am from the first point of view because of two reasons I'll mention in the below passage.
Firstly, young people are very careful and eager to know about whatever happens around them. It makes the characteristics of them and they know this matter very well. They are in the age of making a decision for their life and their future so if they want to have a good life for their children like as they dream or even for themselves, the most effective way to achieve this goal is spending their time and energy on trying bests in this matter. Let's consider a group of students that make effort to increase the knowledge of ordinary people in political subjects by publishing some paper and holding some friendly appointments to study books as a group or even speak with each other. They all continue trying to access a circumstance on which they can live in a healthy and conscious atmosphere in every aspect.
For the Second reason, young people sense of humanity and responsibility to their friends and their lovely families. It is obvious that a big part of their communities are made up of them and young people know they are most important and valuable possessions demanding their time and energy to keeping them for years. They can help in hard ways in exchange and never let them alone in unfortunate events, therefore, It worths it! For example, My mother is one of the kindest and supportive persons I have ever known so far in the world for me. She helps me whenever possible in hard problems happened to me so my consciousness and also my heart says to me be with her and get a high priority to spending time with her. It is right about the rest of my family and friends also.
In conclusion, One can logically make the result that I totally disagree with this statement. Young people give their time to their communities because not only do they know the communities influence their current and future life but also They are human and full of sense of responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69074492099 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5668862288 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498871331828 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8505405786 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.875 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6875 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202682288631 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072166073197 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572734810398 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147592345785 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541961318459 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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