Some people say that the Olympic Games don’t have a role to play in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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Some people say that the Olympic Games don’t have a role to play in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

In this rampant age of globalization, while there are a lot of political and economical tensions arising due to conflicts within the countries, sports such as Olympic Games are playing the key factors in lowering down such issues and brings peace and collaboration among them. In my perception, I believe that although this event is amazingly expensive, it is a worthwhile celebration of sport, friendship, and human achievement. However, I strongly disagree to the fact that Olympic games aren't important anymore in this state-of-the-art.

There are varied points to support my views. First and f...

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but also effects local people
but also affects local people

benefits like economic development, fostering relationships between countries outweighs the disadvantages it may incur.
benefits ... outweigh the disadvantages it may incur.

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