You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company.
In your letter, describe the item,
explain where and when you left it
and
say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of valuable personal item on one of your trains.
Let me elaborate, the item is a blue color Redmi-Note 7 Pro smart mobile and brand name ‘Redmi’ is embossed on the rear side. It has a black color back cover. I also forgot the earphone with the item.
Furthermore, I was traveling from Shimla to Chandigarh on the train number ‘SH-CHD01’ and I was in carriage ‘A’ seat number A457 on Friday 10th January around 3 p.m. I was in a hurry because I have to reach the I.T Park for the interview.
Therefore, I believe, I forgot the item on the train. All my personal data and official details are easily accessible on the phone.
Could you please let me know if a mobile phone fitting with aforementioned description has been found? In case, it is found, please feel free to contact me on my personal mobile number +91-980XXXXX80 and keep it in a safe place. I will arrange to collect it at your earliest convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
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| 2020-01-18 | deepaksharma69 | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-24 | MJ Yand | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...n a hurry because I have to reach the I.T Park for the interview. Therefore, I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ils are easily accessible on the phone. Could you please let me know if a mobile...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83597883598 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08387095565 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1518637425 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132721162435 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531622579035 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446271633874 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743005176973 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355301571954 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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