Should developing countries concentrate on improving industrial skills or should they promote education first?
The importance of developing countries concenterate on improving skills or should they promote education first which was always debatable ha snow trend more become controversial with some people claiming it is beneficial while other some people reject this notion. The substantial influence of trend has sparked the controversy potential impact over recent years. In my opinion former proposition appears to be more rational. I will agree this notion and elaborate some viewpoints and lead to logical conclusion.
These are myriad reasons of which will further explain my arguments on the most preponderant one stems from the fact that main concentrate on educational department, because now in modern era we not comfortable live in society of country. when children well educated they choose their future and do will anything for country, with help of country rating reached day by day. For instance, india is best example.
Elaborating my viewpoints, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that some developing countries concentrate their education system it is crucial steps, after some years these countries increase their ranking, some students developing technology with the help of country get name and fame.
According to arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to conclusion that benefit their economy growth and some factors are indeed to a great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82167475491 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1162600171 50.4703680194 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.555555556 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231654312743 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668784478745 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994344300557 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110457802721 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751169979155 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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