Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.
-Why you will not be able to attend
-How you enjoyed working with her/him
-How you will keep contact with him/her
Dear Ramona,
Hope this letter finds you healthy and well. I am feeling down hearing about your resignation a you are one of the closest co-worker I have in the office. Unfortunately, I will be travelling on the day of your farewell program due to my brother's wedding on the same week. Please accept my apology fot not being able to attend.
it was a pure pleasure working with you as you were the most optimistic person, helping everyone whenever they were on sick leave. I am grateful for all the support you offered me when I joined the workplace as an intern last year. Your guidance, patience and trust on my capability allowed me to perform my best on those early days.
Although you are switching job, I believe we will be in touch. I will follow you on instagram and twitter. Also, can we communicate through video call during the weekends if you are free? I will email you when I am back in town and it would be great to catch up over a coffee.
Wish you all the best at your new job.
best,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Ramona, Hope this letter finds you healthy and w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y apology fot not being able to attend. it was a pure pleasure working with you ...
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Suggestion: It
...y fot not being able to attend. it was a pure pleasure working with you as...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to perform my best on those early days. Although you are switching job, I believ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...you all the best at your new job. best, Shahla
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll the best at your new job. best, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41709198031 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8863922147 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314926744745 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110050719239 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697900930938 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178521875495 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729282900056 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.