Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.
-Why you will not be able to attend
-How you enjoyed working with her/him
-How you will keep contact with him/her
Dear Puja,
I hope you are doing well. I was shocked to know that you are leaving us. Last week Brian told me that, you found a new job and next week is your last week at work. I am already worried that you are leaving us, and I already start missing you just by thinking that you are going away.
I am feeling really bad to tell you that, I will not be able to attend your goodbye party next week. I have an important appointment with my Dentist next week so, I could not make it. Anyways I will see you after also since, we live nearby.
It was always fun and enjoyable working with you. We always worked in a team and you are always helpful whenever I face any problem at work. I will each and every moment we shared together and our coffee talks.
Though, you are leaving the work, but I am happy to know that you found a better job which suits your degree and the job which you were dreaming for from long time. I will contact you through mobile and social media. I wish you all the best for your bright future.
Yours truly,
Preeti
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- Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with her/him-How you will keep contact with him/her 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to attend your goodbye party next week. I have an important appointment with my D...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18137254902 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.88930370075 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.305183191 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340950116319 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125847655685 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729048513789 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214327359687 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255085984504 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.