More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather cooking themselves. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?
Nowadays, people like to eat fast food which is not a good for human health. People who is eating junk, fast food for a long time they are suffering from so many diseases.
Eating a ready to eat food for a long time causes so many problems in human health. So, there is no any advantage to eat fast food people are thinking if they eat fast food. People are thinking if they eat fast food people are thinking if they eat fast food or ready to eat, they can save their time because they don’t have to cook at home. But this idea is not a good idea because it creates so many problems in your life. It makes people lazy in active if you have kids at home, they also learn the same thing from you and for a growing kid they need healthy food rather than fast food or junk food so, in my opinion there is more and more disadvantages to having fast food.
These days people are eating ready to eat meal for their different taste and saving their time. But if people start cooking their own food it will give more advantages in different matter like good food always give a good health to everyone.
In conclusion health is wealth if you want to spend a healthy life you have to start eating good food.
- Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with her/him-How you will keep contact with him/her 56
- Write letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with him/her-How you will keep contact with him/her 73
- : Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with her/him-How you will keep contact with him/her 73
- More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather cooking themselves. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages? 56
- : Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with her/him-How you will keep contact with him/her 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... problems in human health. So, there is no any advantage to eat fast food people a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25108225108 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98437516485 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445887445887 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8894129292 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285415550886 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128723568834 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606897178465 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169412106024 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860316547428 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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