The provided line graph reveals the information about the monthly temperature where as table chart show the hours of sunshine per year in three main cities.
According to the line chart the temperature of Sydney was recorded approximately 25 celsius in first month and started decreasing slightly fill July but after that it increased and reached the same point at the end of year where as London and New York temperature was 4 and 9 Celsius and increase in same way but in April New York temperature increased suddenly and crossed London temperatures and after the middle of the Year both started decreasing and to New Year temperature dropped more than London in the last month.
According to the table chart, London recorded for 1180 hours of sunshine where has 2535 and 2473 our sun sign is shown in New York and Sydney in a year.
Overall, it is interesting to note that Sydney recorded for highest temperature and in recorded for highest power of sunshine.
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- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85542168675 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6299855365 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.623615349 43.030603864 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.5 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230307480793 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173826211902 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160445682267 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173826211902 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160445682267 0.0819641961636 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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