Individual greed and selfishness has been the
basis of the modern society. Some people
think that we must return to the older and
more traditional values of respect for the
family and the local community in order to
create a better world to live in. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Modernity has left an inferior impression on human's characteristics. Nowadays, self-centered and materialistic attitudes of people are making worse to the lifestyle. It is argued that returning to moral values is essential to strengthen relationships with community members to make a pleasant world. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
To begin with, the approach of selfishness is responsible to cause vulnerable relationships with family and community members. For example, people, being self-centered, want to grind their own axes without caring of other's priorities and righ...
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Sentence: For example, people, being self-centered, want to grind their own axes without caring of other's priorities and rights in modern socities.
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Sentence: Apart from it, greediness, sometime, diverts people to join wrong ways which decafe their whole lives.
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Sentence: As a result, it will develop strong affinitiy, intimacy and understanding among family.
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Sentence: Further emphasizing on my point of view, conforming to past, telling cultural, tradional and inspirational stories by elders by spending quality time with youngsters is likely to be lucrative to shape them noble characters.
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Sentence: Besides this, correspondingly to times gone by, elders should guide childern about importance of cultural heritage and historical values to build up respect for dignity of their culture and nation.
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Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1884 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.558 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.079 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.95 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.874 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.253 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.494 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.051 0.07
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The essay is fantastic. It can get 9.0 without spelling errors.
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