People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Modernity has blessed us aristocratic lifestyle in this modern world. Presently,it is argued that the extension of luxury in living standard is fading the importance of traditional values. Hence, it is disgraceful for mankind. Here, I would like to discord with given statement.
To commence with, it is universally acknowledged that 'change is a law of nature'. without change, our lives become monotonous. Thus, people are fond of adopting new ways of living instead of following customary values to make their lives colorful. Apart from it, traditions such as dowry system, no rights for gir...
- In many countries schools have sever problems with student behaviour What do you think What solutions can you suggest 85
- Nowadays most parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for parents to do this? Does it have a positive or a negative effect on children in general? 90
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish production 56
- " success means the desire was strong enough". To what extend do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer? 80
- In some countries some people think that women should have equality with men in particular equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the army Others think women are not suitable for such jobs Discuss both sides and give your opinion 59
Comments
please give d star rating n
please give d star rating n ...tell me how r my ideas n representation ???
Sentence: Apart from it,? traditions such as dowry system, no rights for girls education, no permission to take personal decisions do not appeal to choice of enlightened generation.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to girls and education
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1819 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.303 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.895 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.621 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.243 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5