People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Modernity has blessed us aristocratic lifestyle in this modern world. Presently,it is argued that the extension of luxury in living standard is fading the importance of traditional values. Hence, it is disgraceful for mankind. Here, I would like to discord with given statement.
To commence with, it is universally acknowledged that 'change is a law of nature'. without change, our lives become monotonous. Thus, people are fond of adopting new ways of living instead of following customary values to make their lives colorful. Apart from it, traditions such as dowry system, no rights for gir...
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Sentence: Apart from it,? traditions such as dowry system, no rights for girls education, no permission to take personal decisions do not appeal to choice of enlightened generation.
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