In certain cultures old age is considered to be more important while in others it's the opposite, children are thought to be more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
"Old is gold" as every one knows that when danger is over the head, the old age person give the proper solution. The old person gave the guidelines but to work is impossible task for them and the young youth take responsibility for work and make the culture and nation powerful and wealthy. As I believe, both have their own significant role in developing the culture.
In the first place, old person gave proper knowledge to small children by take out their own experiences which was passed through in past. The children parents are busy in work, so they are handled to grandparents and they are only a one sources of gaining culture training. As many old person tell about the history story of countryside or town. Not only they tell stories but also gave lessons of life, and gave practices have to tackle problems in future as well as gave proper road to get out from dangerous path. The overall development can be done through old people with no cost as they are connected with children. And there were two benefit is seen, one is knowledge explore and other is saving the money.
Every nation needs youth people as old age people can't do work, which uplift the nation as well as culture. The strength of youth are the power of nation in the world market. The old people gave the plan but ti consider, the youth people are required with good strength. To illustrate, in China the old people increased and in that era the country has to see the backward. So,to keep up balance between both the generation is needed to give best balance sheet to the nation.
To summing up, culture are not totally based on one age, but all the ages are given equal importance, so balance has keep up and growth goes in right direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, as to, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59163987138 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35343856742 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8618106755 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131249532678 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438483898175 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275456270434 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781305623477 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161240240349 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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