There is a common saying that " life happens to every one" which in turn seems to affect peoples ideas as well as their thought processes'. This has made some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or, a shortage of money however, others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. This essay will discuss both views as well as give insight to my own opinion.
Often times, people accept whatever situations that come their way due to repeated negative experiences they might have encountered. An example of this would be an unemployed graduate whose sense of judgement might become beclouded with an immediate need to secure a means of livelihood and so, settle for demeaning jobs with little or no satisfaction. Some others as a result of shortage of money, may decide not to pursue their dreams and aspirations due to their inability to fund them. These and many more have resulted in a lot of regrets in the loves of many people.
Despite the negative attitude displayed towards life's issues, others show a more positive side and try to improve any bad situation. This school of thought is up held by optimists and otfen times is backed up with the saying of "if life gives you lemons, make lemonade out of it". A vivid example of this stance, is the musician Kennedy who despite having sight disabilities, has proven to be one of the world's greatest songwriters' in history not allowing any setbacks in life.
I agree completely with this view and am of the opinion that irrespective of the challenges faced, it is more deserving to try improving situations. Life in itself is dynamic and will always provide better opportunities when people continue to strive, refuse to give up and most importantly, never give up. The story of a 22 year old who refused working as a food vendor but instead availed himself for further trainings on ideas and strategies on establishing a food company and has presently become a brand-name nation wide remains a personal motivation to me.
In conclusion, it is evident to say that maintaining a positive mindset in the midst of difficulty is key to achieving success in lifee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ons. This essay will discuss both views as well as give insight to my own opinion. Of...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the greatest'.
Suggestion: worlds the greatest
...sabilities, has proven to be one of the worlds greatest songwriters in history not allowing any...
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Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84920634921 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74126289688 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1314380109 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.928571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329749909 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101769029419 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156357152719 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159535506299 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179990120046 0.056905535591 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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