Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Education plays a quientessential role in the life of our youngsters. While Some people think that homework is necessary to be given to the young children, others believe that it is not. I stand the second view which claim the unnecessaity and in the following lines both views are going to be discussed in further details.

On one hand, some of care givers stated that homework makes the children keep focusing on their subjects. In other words, studying at home by having different assaignments help in paying attention for the diversity of subjects. For example, The Guardian published an article and stated that home work helped in increasing the percentage of students’ success to be 45% particularly in primary schools. Consequently, homework could help in raising the students learning capabilities.

On the other hand, some people and I believe that homework should not be given to the young generation because they can invest that time in discovering the world and enhancing their talents. In other words, not only does learning process depends on the homework but also on knowing the matters outside the school frame. A valid example is an episode which announced by CNN regarding Finland, the country which obsolet the homework till the fifth grade and devoted that time in exploring the students’ talents and hobbies and this had a massive impact on the young generation in Finland.

In conclusion, it can be said that homework is effective tool to maintain the students’ levels , however; discovering their passion is not less importance than the school assaignments. I do agree that tasks and homeworks are less important than general knowledge and youngsters ‘ talents. If the authorities and scholars pay attention to this issue, there will be a huge influence on the foreseeable generation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, regarding, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25423728814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94825218121 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6344994518 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.230769231 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349751571558 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115947392774 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853997690146 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203623401043 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089314522093 0.056905535591 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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