Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
– Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization?
– Ask your friend to help.
– Explain in detail how your friend can help.
Dear Debbie,
Hope things are fine with you!
I have recently got admission in Stanford university and relocated a few months ago. The local community I stay in, has got a group of teenagers taking classes to street kids on weekends. Impressed with their dedication, I was motivated to join them and have also participated in many events.
Currently, the team needs funds to purchase few books and other study equipment, which might help the cognitive exposure of the students. In this accord, I'm persuaded to give my maximum support, aiding them to dwell further.
To mention, you are one of my close acquaintances whom I can trust in and will stand behind me for anything. I would like to request your contribution on this fund collection campaign, though not on a monitory front, as I can understand your financial state, but for the publicity.
The Pearl Cafe, where you work part-time, as from the statistics got the highest number of customers in the region. If you can arrange a few posters on the social activities the organization is carrying out, and money requirement to expand their functional capacity, with the organizer's contact information might be of great help.
request your cooperation on the same, as this will bright up a student's career. I will be waiting to hear from you .
Kind Regards,
Pavani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Debbie, Hope things are fine with you! I have...
^^^^
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...posure of the students. In this accord, Im persuaded to give my maximum support, a...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Request
... information might be of great help. request your cooperation on the same, as this w...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...reer. I will be waiting to hear from you . Kind Regards, Pavani
^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting to hear from you . Kind Regards, Pavani
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80231297765 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669642857143 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5533271792 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114841246562 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333880529189 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375471958962 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506075655657 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438836812458 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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