Nowadays, there are so many old buildings still existing along with stylish buildings. There is a fair amount of people believe that the aged structures should be replaced by modern ones. In my opinion, I totally with this idea and this essay will argue why the new buildings should substitute the old ones.
On the one hand, I agree that the government and the company should maintain the old buildings because those buildings keep a great deal of memories of many generations. People are likely to visit the old buildings where contain their memory with beloved ones to recall particular events when a celebration coming. For example, I always visit my high school which is about 60 years old already on the 20th of November every year to meet my ex-teachers, friends, and to recall events that I had during my study. This is a good example to support old buildings should be maintained.
Although old buildings store a great number of memories, however, it also contains potential dangers to the public. The foundation of the old building, which is more likely to become weak and subsided after existing for a while, can put the public in a dangerous situation. The buildings that self can be collapsed at any time due to weak construction. In addition, the old buildings are having difficulty functioning well because of outdated design. For example, there is not enough space in old buildings to build elevators which are essential in this modern world. Therefore, it is beneficial for the public to have modern buildings built. Those examples strongly supported the idea that old buildings should be abandoned to give way to new modern buildings.
In conclusion, the essay argued why the public should agree on the abandonment of old buildings to give land for modern constructions. From my sentiment, I totally agree with the idea that the old constructions should be replaced due to safety reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97507788162 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73576304051 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2089169662 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317361390577 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126480480945 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074384397752 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217081338836 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321045339549 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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