This topic raises the controversial issue of whether studying major cities gives the reflection of important characteristics of the society.Indisputably,cities have diversified culture.From my point of view,I disagree that understanding the features of the society is the reflection of cities.However,to substantiate my case,I will elaborate with my reasons and examples.
Firstly,The political system is entirely different in cities when compared to rural areas.In cities,most of the individuals are educated .People living in the cities are able to elect a better leader when compared to people living in the small villages.More
the educated people,more observation is done on the leader's work and thereby any sort of malpractices can be questioned by the people together.In contrast,with low literacy rate compared to the cities,the people of the villages are unable to understand the misdeeds of their elected leader.Furthermore,the people in the village are malleable to money distributed in before the election but the individuals of city are not concerned about the money ,their only target is to elect a ambitious leader.Therefore it is very important to look at the villages to understand the different political situations.
Secondly,Now a days,the city dwellers tend to have more health issues than rural people.Rural people work is mostly involved in bodily works which implies they get exercised at their work.But,the metropolitan and cosmopolitan people have a sedentary life style.People of city doesn't get any exercise which results in obesity and other health problems.Health always depends on type of food intake.City residents , because of their schedules do not have the time to cook their food and in turn depend on restaurants.But village people cook their food at home and stay away from health problems.Therefore, in order to know about health ,it is always better to study rural regions.
All in all,due to the aforementioned reasons,it can be apprised that characteristics of society depend on rural regions along with cities.A nation's development and its characteristics can be understood when the rural regions work together with urban regions in a commensurate proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in contrast, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66265060241 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70766419742 2.79657885939 133% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 23.0359550562 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.668270378 60.3974514979 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 470.0 118.986275619 395% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 23.4991977007 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 5.21951772744 536% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112117674184 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766973015627 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367861579142 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665611758835 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386214675784 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.7 14.1392134831 330% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.69 48.8420337079 -61% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.92365168539 256% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 12.1743820225 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.1639044944 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.22 8.38706741573 146% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 11.8971910112 277% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 11.2143820225 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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