Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the last century, thanks to a myriad of technological inventions, the quality of mankind's life has been improved significantly. Among those, some believe that computers are the most crucial ones. Personally, I vehemently agree with this notion.
First and foremost, computers have unquestionably increased the efficiency of work activities. To be specific, by virtue of a wide range of programs installed on the computers, the tasks which used to consume a huge amount of time can now be completed far more quickly. For instance, with the help of the word processing programs, a book author can save hours of handwriting, if not days, to finish their piece of work. If computer had not been invented, the work productivity would have been lowered, which could indirectly worsen our living standards.
Furthermore, not only do computers facilitate work, but they also become a wonderful source of entertainment. This is because when connected with the Internet, computers are able to provide the users with the diverse and unique experiences to help them unwind after long hours of work. As an example, hardly anyone could deny that playing game, listening to music and watching movie via computers have become prevalent ways to enjoy their leisure time. Without such activities, humans' daily lives could have been rendered colourless.
All in all, since computers have played a pivotal role in enhancing the quality of work and entertainment of human beings, I strongly concur with the notion that computer has been the most essential innovation these days.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-29 | tranhien297 | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-14 | Ngân Hà | 56 | view |
| 2020-01-10 | Đỗ Thị Ngọc Ngoan | 56 | view |
| 2020-01-10 | Đỗ Thị Ngọc Ngoan | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-25 | Shivam7090 | 56 | view |
- Does stricter punishment improve safety on our roads 78
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 11
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process. 61
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should spend about 20 minutes on this task 44
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25099601594 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86647226178 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669322709163 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0153037326 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117721962898 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466094316386 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320574095945 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772105444225 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191329614293 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.