Globalization has made the world smaller. Therefor it sometimes creates pressure for major cities. At present people are moving towards urban areas for their betterment in life which creates a serious problem in major towns and cities.
The main cause of this phenomenon is better facility. Who doesn’t want happiness? In many countries, different kind of facilities are centralized in major towns and cities, for instance: Better health care facility, better education, better employment. In order to ensure these, people often move from rural area towards urban area. Besides major airports in cities are responsible for this problem as well. For example, in order to go abroad, people have to come to either Dhaka or Chittagong or even Sylhet. Everyday large number of people come to these cities from different districts of Bangladesh. Moreover, many companies setup their factories in major cities. As a result, thousands of workers are coming to these factories for their earning purpose and thus cities become overcrowded. Furthermore, many government recruitment examinations as well as public university admission testes are also taken place in major cities. People are coming from different part of the country to attend these examinations for which cities become densely populated.
If there is problem, there is solution. Proper planning of allocation is must in this case. Government have to plan in such a way so that people not need to come towards cities or towns in order to take exam. Government can decentralize different working sector to other part where people can easily join these and ensure their earning facilities easily. At the same time government need to establish quality medical facilities to the remote corner of the country so that people will not gather in major cities for having treatment. Airports need to be established out side of the cities which will reduce the population load in cities. Online examination can be a suitable substitution to take part in admission test or recruitment test. So that people need not to come in major cities in order to attend them.
An overcrowded is like a curse for a country. Proper planning and decentralization strategies are good ideas. If the stated actions are applied properly, I think this issue can be solved easily.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...districts of Bangladesh. Moreover, many companies setup their factories in major cities. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...cation is must in this case. Government have to plan in such a way so that people no...
^^^^
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...atment. Airports need to be established out side of the cities which will reduce the pop...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 740, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in admission test or recruitment test. So that people need not to come in major cities...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 764, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'?
Suggestion: come
...cruitment test. So that people need not to come in major cities in order to attend them...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22311827957 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75729804479 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508064516129 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8670821077 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.72 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.88 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834495887691 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264025084205 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283220886381 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516101980137 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311100901496 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...districts of Bangladesh. Moreover, many companies setup their factories in major cities. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...cation is must in this case. Government have to plan in such a way so that people no...
^^^^
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...atment. Airports need to be established out side of the cities which will reduce the pop...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 740, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in admission test or recruitment test. So that people need not to come in major cities...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 764, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'?
Suggestion: come
...cruitment test. So that people need not to come in major cities in order to attend them...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22311827957 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75729804479 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508064516129 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8670821077 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.72 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.88 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834495887691 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264025084205 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283220886381 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516101980137 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311100901496 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.