Company top level authorities should get their employees in decision making or should not. Discuss.
The employees play a vital role in the success of the company. The success of the company depend
on its employees. Therefore the authorities should discuss with their employees.
Employees feedback is important to the company. Because the person is working in the particular
situation knows the ups and down. With all the experience they gained they would be crucial for
some important decision. They give geneine review about anything, they also know every aspect of
the game. Hence the higer authotrities should discuss with the employees before some decision was made.
Secondly, the involvement of the employe will give positive vibe to the employees. They will do their work
with more dedication and hardwork. On the other hand if you treat as a normal employee, they don't do their
work as more concentration. This will reduce the growth of the company. If we want 100 percentage commitement
from our employee, we should give rights and see as a part of the company.
In the end, in this compitetive world the commitement of the employee will determine the sucess of the company.
The combination of top level management and employee is more essential for the company. Hence, employees decision
is much more important to the company.
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- PEOPLE ARE USING A LOT OF ONLINE LANGUAGE TRANSLATION APPS ARE THERE MORE ADVANTAGES THAN DISADVANTAGES TO SUCH SERVICES 55
- Firstly according to contemporary ages modern cultures are been changed and been similar when compared to the past we find more positive development than negative development furthermore disadvantage are also considered to be worth it 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14077669903 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73506105222 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1837201643 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.1875 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234080600337 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790528618134 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945848871544 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823891414479 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091488730369 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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