Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern era, finding a job is not limited to field work, but it extended to electronic work. Whilst some are of the belief that working from home has many positive aspects, others have a diverse view. I am of the opinion that working at a specific organization has its advantages rather than online job from home. In this essay, both prespectives along with my point of view will be demonstrated before we reach a conclusion.
On one hand, Internet inventions have an effective role when it comes to online work. In other words, technology has assisted males and females from getting jobs and working from their comfort zone without the need to go outside. Not only does working from home helps to save transportation money but it also saves time; moreover, environmentaly, the completion of houses' duties without going outside, it reduces traffic jam; it minimizes the number of cars on the streets. In addition to that housewives can work and look after their children as well. For instance, in 2017, a survey has been published by The Economist, showed that after the spread of jobs over the Internet, there are an increasing in the number of working women.
Despite the idea mentiond-above, it can be assumed that working from home has several drawbacks. To illustrate, working from home is killing activism and replace it by slacktivism. Besides, people who are working from home have less chance for promotion when it comes to career gradient. Furthermore, it has a detrimental effect on interpersonal skills due to the lack of communication with others.For example, according to research by The New York Times, showed that people who work outside at local or governmental jobs have a better communication standards more than others by 65%. Thus, working from home has a positive impact on health and society norms .
In conclusion, the power of technology has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. Therefore, it has helped the current generations to work full-time or part-time from houses and sometimes both; I still believe that it has demerits outnumber merits. It is recommended that individuals who want to increase there income, ought to work a full-time job at offices beside part-time from home to gain both benefits of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96325459318 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82800672733 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564304461942 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5956385855 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431147211727 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146838803126 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848569098772 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268893821332 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549811179918 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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