Games are an integral part of any human's life. Apart from just being fun, there are many health benefits of playing games. I certainly don't believe that there is any age restriction for any kind of game. I believe that games are as important for adults as they are for children. The main reasons for my belief are that games makes life more enjoyable, helps relax the mind and also has many health benefits.
Firstly, I believe that our lives have become very hectic nowadays due to the busy life schedule, tiering jobs, stressful social life etc. There is a direct impact of this stressful life on one's health, however games might help a lot in reducing the stress. It is a fact that when we play games, our mind does not focuses on the stress and that gives relief.
Secondly, I believe that games are necessary because it helps in forming a strong bond between the family members. Nowadays parents don't get sufficient time with their children as they are busy with their jobs. due to this they sometimes feel separated from their children. But playing games can help in forming a strong bond between parents and children. They can get to know blit each other's likes and dislikes and can enjoy spending time together as a family
Apart from this, playing games keeps the body and mind active which in turn keeps the body healthier. So in other words, playing games can help improve health.
Finally, I believe that games should be played bu the people of each age group as it is beneficial to all in all the ways discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60583941606 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16886605556 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1156107048 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17601841224 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749354668353 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106755583224 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862370332833 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841743711379 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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