Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement contends that government officials should carry out their decision rather than carrying out the people's will blindly. I agree insofar with author's contention. However, the government officials should not stubbornly carry out their plans without even taking care of people's desire.
The chief reason of my agreement to author's contention lies in feeling that government plans must be indiscriminate, and should not be influenced by the desires of some group. If government officials were to start to follow people's will blindly, it actually wouldn't serve its own purpose of treating people equally. People are more inclined to their idea, decision, religion and customs, so they may want to fulfill their plans. But these plans may be pernicious to another group of people. For an example, people of Hindu religion proponent an idea of not allowing another religion people into their temple, a holy place, and government officials blindly carry out their will, it will create a wreak havoc, and, perhaps, religion crisis in nation.
However, if the government officials obdurate to their plans and are not willing to hear to people, it will create a dissatisfaction in people. Sometimes, it is possible that the government imposes a law that actually inflicts people's rights, and even their feelings. But the refractory government causes a chaos and disagreement between people and itself. For an example, the government of a developing country starts to allow a foreign direct investment although this will have a deleterious effect on local merchants' business. People may request and even supplant the government to discard this policy. If the government doesn't listen to their plan and stick to their stubborn nature, it will cause great damage to local business and, perhaps, country's economy.
In sum, the government officials should follow their judgment regardless of people desire, but not an extent that it doesn't even care of people's need that damages to both people and country. The government officials must be perspicacious enough to discern people's true will and act wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ollow peoples will blindly, it actually wouldnt serve its own purpose of treating peopl...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ly carry out their will, it will create a wreak havoc, and, perhaps, religion crisis in...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... discard this policy. If the government doesnt listen to their plan and stick to their...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...eople desire, but not an extent that it doesnt even care of peoples need that damages ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32634730539 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71499442656 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2496635755 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1875 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290038149443 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110915410701 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742755819842 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215658831097 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691653518138 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.