some people think that it is better to educate boys & girls in separate schools. others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
discuss both these views and give your opinion
Since old centuries and till today education is still considered an important skill that each one should have. In fact, if you are well-educated you will have a lot of opportunities in the future. While a lot of people believe that mixed schools are essential to have better personality for boys & girls, I think that single sex schools will help them more when starting their careers.
On the first hand, teaching children in mixed schools will help to know the opposite sex .Firstly, since boys and girls have a lot of differences physically and morally school is an important step to learn about them. Secondly, the personality of girls especially will be stronger since they used to study with boys and doing a lot of activities together. In addition, when studying in mixed schools girls will not focus on each other’s this will limit the risk of becoming lesbians and gays. For instance , studying in mixed school will help girls and boys to find easily their partners when they grow up .
On the other hand, studying in a single sex schools has a lot of advantages too . Starting with the concentration that will be well maintained in those types of schools. In fact, presence of boys in the class will lead to lot of distractions since they always try to talk with the girls with subjects that are not related to their study. Generally speaking , girls are able to concentrate more on their study than boys .So as a result when we separate schools for boys and girls we will help both sex and especially girls to have better future and succeeded in their careers since they have the ability to focus more at school.
Finally, we should agree whether studying at single sex schools or mixed schools have a lot of advantages and disadvantages but in my opinion studying in single schools is more beneficial and have a positive impact in the career development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78153846154 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58235163076 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470769230769 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0561723094 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299010176736 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124658091942 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852066803038 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200320193787 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398281781546 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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