Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
It is argued that success in life is a valuable indicator of intelligence. This essay agrees with that suggestion completely because brilliant people have a unique characters enable them to succeed. This essay will first look at the cause of considering success as a good indicator of intellect and then discuss the way to achieve that.
As success in life is a complicated process; only intelligent people can afford it. This is because of having extraordinary intellectual functions due to presence of specific neurochemical transmitters in their brains. For example, in a study done by Harvard University revealed that there is a strong correlation between satisfactions in life and higher Intelligent Quotient (IQ) with elevated levels of brain chemicals.
A clever people always want to go successfully through their life; although it is a difficult task due to its wide scope including many aspects like job, social, academic and many others; so, they depend on their abilities to criticize every situation they pass through to gain overwhelmingly benefits. This matter, situational critical analysis, is an important step in their success pathway. For example, a famous company manager, in a television interview, mentioned that he used to analyse his activities every day and learned from it.
In conclusion, prosperity in life is a principal determinant of intellect among people because it increases their abilities to pass every obstacles and booster their chances in life. Success alone is considered by researchers and scientists as a worthy indicator for brilliance and excellent intellectual activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'character'?
Suggestion: character
... because brilliant people have a unique characters enable them to succeed. This essay will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46215139442 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14935640075 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6147722976 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110114145781 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475753262121 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456812565846 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693646379343 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324074920277 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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