summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage
The reading passage mentions there are three reasons to explain why the "let it burn" policy is not a good idea, but the lecture disagrees with these reasons.
First, in the reading, the destruction of vegetation is a severe issue but according to the lecture, the damage of this fire will be compensated with the creation of new trees and it's an opportunity to have new plants. For example, when the large trees are gone, there is an open and unshaded space for small trees to grow, or the heat will create the right conditions for that kind of species that grow in warm weather.
The second reason on the passage is about animals and putting their lives in danger, making them escape, ruining their habitats and lack of food versus the woman in the lecture believes the wildlife will be recovered and also this is a new opportunity too since creation of small trees after the fire will be a good source of food for small animals like rabbits and it attracts predators and help them to get more food.
The last problem is the tourist attraction of the park. The reading assumes these fires will decrease the visitors. Thereinafter local businesses will lose their customers. But the lecture points out that it's not a true statement since these fires need the combination of strong winds and dry weather so it’s rare and won't happen every year. Therefore their probability is not that much to affect the touristic aspect of the land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is the tourist attraction of the park. The reading assumes these fires will decrea...
^^^
Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...o it’s rare and wont happen every year. Therefore their probability is not that much to a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73517786561 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39297951974 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.308657865 49.2860985944 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.111111111 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955162271558 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350126458606 0.0996497079465 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038424221937 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613757905093 0.162205337803 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338901881372 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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