In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that in many parts of the world, western styles of clothing are preferred to traditional ones. This trend happens because of some reasons, and I believe that it is a positive development.
There are two principal reasons for the growing popularity of western clothes worldwide. First, the influence of the media, particularly Hollywood films, is responsible for the tendency of youngsters to associate western clothes with a life of glamour and success. As a result, these images are now universally popularised and the name of brands such as Gucci, Nike and Versace are known almost everywhere. Second, Western clothes are suitable for modern working life. Denim overalls are practical and serviceable for those working with machines, while businessmen are expected by their employers to wear smart suits or uniforms based on Western designs.
I consider that this trend is largely positive. One positive aspect is that western clothes namely Jeans and T-shirts are versatile, which are worn for many work and leisure activities. People of all ages could feel comfortable to wear such western clothes. Additionally, since western styles have been mass-produced by the international clothing industry they are therefore increasingly affordable. The final aspect is that youngsters in developing nations could be more familiar with western cultures, which helps them integrate easier into the international community when they have the chance to work or study in developed countries.
In conclusion, the widespread adoption of western styles of clothing is a result of our modern way of life, and I believe that this trend has largely positive consequences
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trend has largely positive consequences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4061302682 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91593788277 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5781241237 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326373232382 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113254449938 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544342979498 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196156054018 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305955528483 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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